My Mom
When I'm at school, I miss my mom,
Treats me like her sis, my mom.
Keeps me focussed, on my goal,
Wouldn't let me, digress my mom.
Flattered and happy, she does feel,
When dad tries to impress my mom.
When she is tired, working all day,
I go hug and kiss my mom.
Finds always what, I'm up to,
Really can make good guess my mom.
Loves me, pampers me, cares for me,
You are my ultimate bliss my mom.
-Kashika Bharol
Nice job Kashika. I am sure you mom will love it when you show this to her on mother's day.
ReplyDeleteDear Kashika, I read the story- 'Lost lunch boxes' also, very good attempt n congrats for prize for the same. Now, urs poem 'My mom'is,really, a matchless gift to ur mom on mother's day. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYours Chachi
Madhu
Dear kashika, great job and composition.but the sad part of the story is that u have not still composed the poem "my chachu".best wishes n expecting the poem will be online soon
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chachu
Dearest Kashika,
ReplyDeleteThat's the sweetest poem I've ever read. Your mom is one special person and so are you!
You are very talented and compassionate. Many many blessings to you. Keep posting more work.
Bhavna Auntie
very cooooool..... awesome! ..Rajeev one suggestion ... let her do it on paper and scan and post .. that way it will encourge her to do more on paper and less screen time ..maybe..
ReplyDeleteVery good Kashika. Very well composed. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteLots of Love
Harsh
ok! Dearest Gogu,best job done.May god bless u and u shine the name of ur parents and family like this.This wasn't an easy job for a kid,but u r a extra-ordinary intelligent kid.keep it up.May god bless u.
ReplyDeleteTake care,
Ur Mamu.
nice work Kashika . Keep it up . very well written . Bhabhi will surely like it ! God bless u dear !
ReplyDeleteSonal
Dear Gogu
ReplyDeleteI like this poem.Mama loves you a lot.
your mama